Thursday, April 25, 2013

Narrowing down essay

Why their relationship is normal: the emotions he expresses, their first date. Why what makes them normal also makes them outsiders: the paragraph about love toward the end, the other relationships, the prison visit, the timing of their first date.
How their relationship actively outcasts them: the prosecution about his relationship, the little world they get into when they're near each other, how their engagement was not really consensual or confirmed, the paragraph toward the end about how their relationship is meaningless when they are not cop lose, and how he never says that he loves her, only that he luste for her.
Obviously, I will not include all of these, but I'm helping myself narrow things down. I have already posted a draft of my thesis. I will work on its structure and wording when I 'm writing the first paragraph so it will fit with the paragraph and the essay.

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